Please Do Now:
- Do the following SAT writing problems: writing 10 1-4
- As a comment to this post, categorize the error with each sentence (say what’s wrong with the sentence, using one of the no-no’s we’ve learned so far), and write which replacement best corrects the error.
Today, students will:
- Josh, Amanda, Nadine and Rachel will present their GAMCOI’s (Greatest and Most Common Opportunities for Improvement).
- Review peer evaluation forms
- Veterans will write peer evaluation forms for newbies
- Business meeting: We need to know who you are contacting by the end of the period
- Editorial meeting: We need to know what articles are going in the paper by the end of the period
Tonight’s homework is:
- Veteran peer evaluation forms must be posted AS A COMMENT TO NEWBIE SECOND DRAFTS by the beginning of class Thursday.
- Editor peer evaluation forms must be posted AS A COMMENT TO NEWBIE SECOND DRAFTS by the beginning of class Thursday.
- Newbie final Drafts are due Monday.
- Business staff: 3 presentations each are due Thursday; Ad money to justify HOF issue is due Friday; When am I getting my receipt book?
- Graphic assignment sheet is due Thursday.
- Dummy is due Monday.
22 responses so far ↓
Aaron // September 29, 2009 at 4:58 pm |
1. d
2. e
3. e
4. c
Helen Rynor and Lauren Peterson // September 29, 2009 at 4:59 pm |
1. D
2. E
3. E
4. C
patrick and sam(anthaaaaa) // September 29, 2009 at 4:59 pm |
1. D Came from
2. E
3. E
4. C
Kelsey Sumalla // September 29, 2009 at 5:00 pm |
1. D
2. E
3. E
4. C
sarahm2012 // September 29, 2009 at 5:00 pm |
1. D.
2. E.
3. E.
4. C.
lenac2011 // September 29, 2009 at 5:02 pm |
1. D
2. E
3. E
4. C
willyc2012 // September 29, 2009 at 5:02 pm |
1.d came from tense is wrong
2.e you don’t know what “as patients” is referring too.
3.e don’t know what anything refers too.
4.c no indication as too what favorite author is referring to. Object confusion
Willy &Leigh
lauraap2012 // September 29, 2009 at 5:02 pm |
1.D
2.E
3.E
4.C
Pelinsu Mese and Alexa Elder and Alessia Pizzorni // September 29, 2009 at 5:02 pm |
1. D
Because the subject needs to be linked to the verb.
2. E
The word you should be reffering to patients not medical doctors.
3. E
Because Professor Clark is the one lecturing at the university.
4. C
The word they her is overused in the sentence.
joselyng2010 // September 29, 2009 at 5:02 pm |
1.D
2.C.
3.E
4.C
Alexandra Rodriguez // September 29, 2009 at 5:03 pm |
1.came from
2. the medical diretors of the clinic belive that as paients, you
3.Professer clark advised her audiance to read the poetry of margaret atwood.
4.c
jessekirk11 // September 29, 2009 at 5:03 pm |
1. D
2. E
3. E
4. C
Barbara Toledo // September 29, 2009 at 5:03 pm |
1.D
2.E
3.E
4.C
Lucia Rynka // September 29, 2009 at 5:04 pm |
1) D
The verb does not agree with the subject.
2) E
The subject must be followed by the phrase that related to it, doctors is not the subject being modified; patient is.
3) E
Professor Clark is the one giving the speech, not Margaret Atwood.
4) C
Phantom pro-noun; who is her?
carmenk2012 // September 29, 2009 at 5:04 pm |
1. D
2. E
3. E
4. C
wendy g // September 29, 2009 at 5:04 pm |
1. D.
2. E.
3. E.
4. C.
Maria Guzman // September 29, 2009 at 5:04 pm |
1. D – The verb does not agree with the subject
2. E – The subject must be followed by the phrase that related to it, doctors is not the subject being modified, patients is.
3. E – Professor Clark is giving the lecture and she advises her students to read the poetry, not the other way around
4- C It is a phantom pronoun
John // September 29, 2009 at 5:04 pm |
1. D
2. E
3. E
4. C
Brittany Waserstein, Lena and Kaiya Williams // September 29, 2009 at 5:05 pm |
D
E
E
C
Brittany Waserstein, Jessica Waserstein // September 29, 2009 at 5:05 pm |
D
E
E
C
annag2013 // September 29, 2009 at 8:32 pm |
1D
2E
3E
4C
anag2013 // September 29, 2009 at 8:40 pm |
mr.weiss i dont now if u marked me absent or present because when u called row i was in the bathroom and i was gunna tell u afterschool but u where with sum students and i had to go…so i dont know if i was here or absent..
-anna gonzalez
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