Computers!
Please Do Now:
- Read and answer the questions: SAT Writing
- Post your answers as a comment to this post, and correct the problem with each sentence.
Today, students will:
- Complete notes and quotes sheets – due at the end of class today
- Business staff – Finish business plans with contact information by the end of class today
- Veterans – Second drafts due at the end of class today
Tonight’s homework is:
- Newbies: first drafts due on your blog before class Tuesday. Please post as a word doc and text.
- Veterans: help and supervise your newbies
- Section editors: veteran edits due to Josh by Tuesday
20 responses so far ↓
Alexandra Elder // September 18, 2009 at 4:59 pm |
19. which have continued
20. no error
21. has been
22. creative artists
23. were convinced
24. no error
25. no error
Pelinsu Mese & Alessia Pizzorni // September 18, 2009 at 5:00 pm |
19. which have continued
20. no error
21. has been
22. creative artists
23. were convinced
24. no error
25. will set
liseh2010 // September 18, 2009 at 5:03 pm |
19. B, Which have continued
20.
21. has been
22. No error
23. were convinced
24. No error
25. No error
jessicashevlin // September 18, 2009 at 5:03 pm |
19. which
20. no error
21. was
22. creative artist
23. were convinced
24. no error
25. no error
jessicaw2010 // September 18, 2009 at 5:04 pm |
Josh Dermer too
19. A
20. A
21. B
22. E
23. C
24. B
25. A
Alexandra Rodriguez // September 18, 2009 at 5:05 pm |
19. which
20. no error
21. was
22. creative artist
23. were convinced
24. no error
25. no error
***jessica was on this computer b4 me and the name was still there. i forgot to erase her name.
-Alexandra Rodriguez
Barbara Toledo // September 18, 2009 at 5:05 pm |
19.Whom have continued
20.E
21.B.Have been;
22.D.Creative artists
23.E
24.E
25.E
Wendy Goya and Jesse Kirkpatrick // September 18, 2009 at 5:06 pm |
19. B. which HAVE
20. A. ARISEN
21. E.
22. D. creative artistS
23. C. WAS calculated
24. B. cleverLY
25. E.
LYSSA GOLDBERG HELPED
Lucia Rynka // September 18, 2009 at 5:07 pm |
19) D; “are” should be “is”
20) E; no errors
21) B; “will be” should be “is”
22) B; “to copy” should be “copying”
23) B; “just days should be “days”
24) A; “although” should be “though”
25) C; “as much by” should be “from”
Kelsey Sumalla // September 18, 2009 at 5:07 pm |
19. B “have continued”
20. A “arisen”
21.B “has been”
22. D “creative artists”
23. C “was calculated”
24. B “cleverly”
25. E
sarahm2012 // September 18, 2009 at 5:07 pm |
19) C. Which have continued…
20) A. Risen.
21) D. To working at a factory.
22) D. From becoming creative artists…
23) E. No error.
24) B. Cleverly designed.
25) A. Will set…
lenac2011 // September 18, 2009 at 5:07 pm |
19. which
20. no error
21. no error
22. a creative artist
23. were calculated
24. no error
25. no error
also by Brittany and Kaiya
Maria Montero // September 18, 2009 at 5:08 pm |
19.a. Which have continued
20.e. no error
21.e. no error
22.prevent
23. eas calculated
24.e. no error
25.
Kelsey Sumalla // September 18, 2009 at 5:08 pm |
Kelsey Sumalla, Rachel Coller, Nadine Goldberg
19. B “have continued”
20. A “arisen”
21.B “has been”
22. D “creative artists”
23. C “was calculated”
24. B “cleverly”
25. E
jessicaw2010 // September 18, 2009 at 5:08 pm |
Josh Dermer too
19. A- which
20. no error
21. B- was
22. no error
23. C- were convinced
24. E- no error
25. A- sets
lauraap2012 // September 18, 2009 at 5:08 pm |
19.B. Which HAVE continued
20. No error
21. B was
22.No error
23.were convinced
24.-
25.-
willyc2012 // September 18, 2009 at 5:08 pm |
19.Which have B.
20. No Error E.
21.was B.
22. creative artists D.
23.was calculated C.
24.cleverly
25.No error E.
Willy Leigh
Johnl2013 // September 18, 2009 at 5:08 pm |
19. which have continued
20. no error
21. has been
22. creative artists
23. were convinced
24. no error
25. no error
carmenk2012 // September 18, 2009 at 5:36 pm |
19. B. “has continued” should be “have continued”
20. A. “arose” should be “arisen”
21. B. “will be” should be “was”
22. D. “a creative artist” should be “creative artists”
23. C. “were calculated” should be “was calculated”
24. B. “clever” should be “cleverly”
25. E. no error
mariap2011 // September 19, 2009 at 1:04 am |
Sorry I wasn’t in class today! Ive been sick with a high fever and havent been able to get out of bed all day. I’ll be there next class and I’ll try to conduct all my interviews via facebook! Sorry for missing another class!!