Mr. Weiss – Journalism I – Faculty Adviser

Peer Editing

November 25, 2008 · 19 Comments

OK guys, I am going to be in and out of class today beacause of a meeting.  Please follow these directions closely and then HAVE A GREAT THANKSGIVING!

Please Do Now:

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Today, students will:

  1. Get into groups of 4 or 5.
  2. Complete opinion editing forms for each other – http://weissjournalism1.wordpress.com/forms/
  3. Pay special attention to “unproven assertions” and “suggested sources” as these are the most important parts of the form at this stage.
  4. Begin work on second drafts.

Tonight’s homework is:

  1. Second drafts due Dec 1

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19 responses so far ↓

  • jessicaw2010 // November 25, 2008 at 6:06 pm | Reply

    Part A.
    1. their
    2. their
    3. his or her
    4. his or her
    5. his

    Part B.
    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. his or her
    7. their
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are

  • brittanywaserstein // November 25, 2008 at 6:07 pm | Reply

    1. their
    2. their
    3. his or her
    4. his or her
    5. his

    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. his or her
    7. their
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are

  • lenac2011 // November 25, 2008 at 6:09 pm | Reply

    Part A.
    1. his or her
    2. his
    3. their
    4. his
    5. his or her
    Part B.
    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. present
    6. their
    7. his or her
    8. are
    9. come
    10. are

  • 7y13r // November 25, 2008 at 6:11 pm | Reply

    1. his or her
    2. his
    3. their
    4. his
    5. his or her

    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. present
    6. their
    7. his or her
    8. are
    9. come
    10. are

  • hkramer14 // November 25, 2008 at 6:12 pm | Reply

    PART A

    1. his or her
    2. their
    3. their
    4. his or her
    5. their

    PART B

    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. their
    7. his or her
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are

    :D

  • madisonjsanders // November 25, 2008 at 6:12 pm | Reply

    1. his or her
    2. their
    3. their
    4. their
    5. his or her
    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. his or her
    7. their
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are

  • LyssaG2011 // November 25, 2008 at 6:13 pm | Reply

    1) his
    2) his
    3) his
    4) his
    5) his

    1) takes
    2) have
    3) need
    4) last
    5) presents
    6) their
    7) their
    8) are
    9) comes
    10) are

  • Kelsey Sumalla // November 25, 2008 at 6:14 pm | Reply

    1. their
    2. their
    3 his or her
    4. her
    5. his

    1.takes
    2.have
    3.need
    4.last
    5.presents
    6.his or her
    7.their
    8.are
    9.comes
    10.are

  • jessekirk11 // November 25, 2008 at 6:14 pm | Reply

    1. his
    2. his
    3. his
    4. his
    5. his

    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. his
    7. their
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are

  • xkatastrophe // November 25, 2008 at 6:14 pm | Reply

    Part A.
    1. their
    2. their
    3. his or her
    4. their
    5. his or her

    Part B
    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. their
    7. his or her
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are

  • carmenk2012 // November 25, 2008 at 6:14 pm | Reply

    1. his or her
    2. their
    3. their
    4. his or her
    5. their

    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. their
    7. his or her
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are

  • patrickquinlan // November 25, 2008 at 6:17 pm | Reply

    1. their
    2. their
    3. his or her
    4. His or her
    5. His or her
    6. Takes
    7. Have
    8. need
    9. last
    11. presents
    12. their
    13. their
    14. are
    15. comes
    16. are

  • nadineg2012 // November 25, 2008 at 6:23 pm | Reply

    1. his or her
    2. their
    3. their
    4. their
    5. his or her

    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. their
    7. their
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are

  • hrynor // November 25, 2008 at 6:23 pm | Reply

    Part A:
    1. Their
    2. Their
    3. His or her
    4. His or her
    5. His or her
    Part B:
    1. Takes
    2. Have
    3. Need
    4. Last
    5. Presents
    6. Their
    7. Their
    8. Are
    9. Comes
    10. Are

  • laurenpeterson1 // November 25, 2008 at 6:28 pm | Reply

    1. His or her
    2. Their
    3. Their
    4. His or her
    5. His or her
    ————————————————————
    1. Takes
    2. Have
    3. Need
    4. Last
    5. Presents
    6. Their
    7. His or her
    8. Are
    9. Comes
    10. Are

    :)

  • laurenpeterson1 // November 25, 2008 at 6:29 pm | Reply

    :)

  • molliee // November 25, 2008 at 6:35 pm | Reply

    1. his or her
    2. their
    3. their
    4. their
    5. his or her

    1. takes
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. their
    7. their
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are
    :)

  • alicel2011 // November 25, 2008 at 6:37 pm | Reply

    1.his or her
    2.their
    3.their
    4.his or her
    5.their

    part B
    1.take
    2.have
    3.need
    4.last
    5.presents
    6.his or her
    7.their
    8.are
    9.comes
    10.are

  • allisonnovack // November 26, 2008 at 1:52 am | Reply

    1. take
    2. have
    3. need
    4. last
    5. presents
    6. their
    7. their
    8. are
    9. comes
    10. are

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