Mr. Weiss – Journalism I – Faculty Adviser

Grammar and Planner Peer Feedback

November 19, 2008 · 20 Comments

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Today, students will:

  1. Peer edit planners in groups of 4.  Give your partners a GREEN, YELLOW, or RED Light on how to proceed with their story.
  2. Bring your planner to me for my GREEN, YELLOW, or RED light.
  3. If you get a GREEN or YELLOW light from me, you may begin interviews.

Tonight’s homework is:

  1. Notes and Quotes due Friday.
  2. This isn’t mandatory, but I thought it was a great piece of reporting: http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2008/11/17/081117fa_fact_remnick - just think of all the people the author had to interview!

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20 responses so far ↓

  • lenac2011 // November 19, 2008 at 6:02 pm | Reply

    1. him
    2. he and she
    3. he and she
    4. her
    5. she
    6. he
    7. they and we
    8. I
    9. them
    10. him

    1.there, you’re
    2. their
    3. you’re
    4. its, it’s
    5. their, their
    6. you’re, your
    7. your, they’re
    8. it’s, your
    9. its, it’s
    10. there, its

  • kevins2011 // November 19, 2008 at 6:02 pm | Reply

    1. him
    2. he she
    3. he she
    4. her
    5. she
    6. he
    7. them us
    8. I
    9. them
    10. him

    1. there you’re
    2. their
    3. you’re
    4. it’s its
    5. their their
    6. you’re your
    7. your they’re
    8. its your
    9. it’s its
    10. there it’s

  • brittanywaserstein // November 19, 2008 at 6:02 pm | Reply

    1. him
    2. him and her
    3. he and she
    4. her
    5. her
    6. him
    7. them and us
    8. I
    9. them
    10. him

    1. there and your
    2. their
    3. your
    4. its and it’s
    5. their and their
    6. you’re and your
    7. your and they’re
    8. it’s and your
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    10. there and its

  • jessicaw2010 // November 19, 2008 at 6:02 pm | Reply

    1. him
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    3. he, she
    4. her
    5. her
    6. him
    7. them , us
    8. I
    9. them
    10. him

    1. there, you’re
    2. their
    3. you’re
    4. its, it’s
    5. their, their
    6. you’re, your
    7. your, they’re
    8. it’s, your
    9. its, it’s
    10. there, its

  • LyssaG2011 // November 19, 2008 at 6:03 pm | Reply

    1. him
    2. him, her
    3. he, she
    4. her
    5. she
    6. him
    7. they, we
    8. me
    9. them
    10. him

    1. there, you’re
    2. their
    3. you’re
    4. its, it’s
    5. their, their
    6. you’re, your
    7. your, they’re
    8. it’s, your
    9. its, it’s
    10. there, its

  • patrickquinlan // November 19, 2008 at 6:03 pm | Reply

    1. Him
    2. Him, Her
    3. He, She
    4. Her
    5. Her
    6. Him
    7. Them, Us
    8. Me
    9. Them
    10. Him
    11. There, You’re
    12. Their
    13. You’re
    14. Its, It’s
    15. Their, Their
    16. You’re, Your
    17. Your, They’re
    18. It’s, Your
    19. Its, It’s
    20. There, Its

  • allisonnovack // November 19, 2008 at 6:03 pm | Reply

    1) him
    2) him/her
    3)he/she
    4)her
    5)her
    6)him
    7)them/us
    8)i
    9)them
    10)him
    1)there/you’re
    2)their
    3)you’re
    4)its/it’s
    5)their/their
    6)you’re/your
    7)your/their
    8)it’s/your
    9)its/it’s
    10)there/its

  • jessekirk11 // November 19, 2008 at 6:05 pm | Reply

    1. him
    2. him/her
    3. he/she
    4. her
    5. she
    6. him
    7. them/us
    8. me
    9. them
    10. him
    _____
    1. there/ you’re
    2. Their
    3. you’re
    4. its/it’s
    5. their/their
    6. you’re/your
    7. your/they’re
    8. It’s/your
    9. its/it’s
    10. there/its

  • laurenpeterson1 // November 19, 2008 at 6:06 pm | Reply

    1. Him
    2. Him, Her
    3. He, she
    4. Her
    5. Her
    6. Him
    7. Them, us
    8. Me
    9. Them
    10. Him
    11. There, You’re
    12. Their
    13. You’re
    14. Its, It’s
    15. Their, Their
    16. You’re, Your
    17. Your, They’re
    18. It’s, Your
    19. Its, It’s
    20. There, Its
    :)

  • Kelsey Sumalla // November 19, 2008 at 6:06 pm | Reply

    1. him
    2. him and her
    3.he and she
    4.her
    5.she
    6.him
    7.they and us
    8.me
    9.them
    10.him

    1.there you’re
    2.their
    3.you’re
    4.its it’s
    5. their their
    6.you’re your
    7.your they’re
    8.it’s your
    9. its it’s
    10.there its

  • alicel2011 // November 19, 2008 at 6:07 pm | Reply

    1. Him
    2.HIm and Her
    3.HE and she
    4.Her
    5.Her
    6. he
    7.they and us
    8.me
    9.they
    10.him
    Part B
    1.There, you’re
    2.Their
    3.you’re
    4.its and it’s
    5.their.their
    6.you’re,your
    7.your, they’re
    8.It’s, your
    9.its , it’s
    10. there,its

  • gwenxawesome // November 19, 2008 at 6:07 pm | Reply

    1. The coach singled out Jeff and him as the games most valuable players.
    2. A run-off vote between him and her decided the election for Council President.
    3. The final tally shows that he won, but she was only a few votes behind.
    4. The schools spanish teachers are her, and Mr. Alfred Lopez.
    5. Both Mr. Lopez and her have excellent accents.
    6. The scholarships given Sandra and him are awarded yearly.
    7. Of all the schools in the league, them and us have the most intense rivalry.
    8. The teacher wants you and I to take attendance.
    9. Rumors are circulating that the Wilkersons and them are planing a surprise party for Mr.Claypoole.
    10. The source of the rumor is him and Scott.

    Part B:

    1. There, You’re
    2. Their
    3.

  • RayL2012 // November 19, 2008 at 6:09 pm | Reply

    1.him
    2.him, her
    3.he, she
    4.her
    5.her
    6.him
    7.they and we
    8.i
    9.they
    10.him

    1.there
    2.their
    3.you’re
    4.its
    5.their,their
    6.you’re, they’re
    7.your, they’re
    8.it’s, your
    9.its,it’s
    10.there,its

  • molliee // November 19, 2008 at 6:09 pm | Reply

    1. Him
    2. Him, Her
    3. He, She
    4. Her
    5. Her
    6. Him
    7. Them, Us
    8. Me
    9. Them
    10. Him
    11. There, You’re
    12. Their
    13. You’re
    14. Its, It’s
    15. Their, Their
    16. You’re, Your
    17. Your, They’re
    18. It’s, Your
    19. Its, It’s
    20. There, Its
    :D

  • hkramer14 // November 19, 2008 at 6:11 pm | Reply

    1. him
    2. him and her
    3. he and she
    4. her
    5. she
    6. him
    7. they and we
    8. me
    9. they
    10. him

    1. there and you’re
    2. Their
    3. you’re
    4. its and it’s
    5. their and their
    6. you’re, your
    7. your, they’re
    8. it’s, your
    9. its, it’s
    10. there, its

    :)

  • carmenk2012 // November 19, 2008 at 6:11 pm | Reply

    Part A.

    1. him
    2. him, her
    3. he, she
    4. her
    5. she
    6. him
    7. they, we
    8. me
    9. they
    10. him

    Part B.

    1. there, you’re
    2. their
    3. you’re
    4. its, it’s
    5. their, their
    6. you’re, your
    7. your, they’re
    8. it’s , your
    9. its, it’s
    10. there, its

  • xkatastrophe // November 19, 2008 at 6:20 pm | Reply

    1. The coach singled out Jim and [him] as the game’s most valuable players.
    2. A runoff vote between [him] and [her] decided the election for council president.
    3. The final tally showed that [he] won but [she] was only a few votes behind.
    4. The school’s Spanish teachers are [she] and Mr Alfred Lopez.
    5. Both Mr Lopez and [she] have excellent accents.
    6. The scholarships given to Sandra and [him] are awarded yearly.
    7. Of all the schools in the league, [they] and [we] have the most intense rivalry.
    8. The teacher wants you and [me] to take attendance.
    9. Rumors are circling that the Wilkersons and [they] are planning a surprise party for Mr Claypoole.
    10. The source of the rumor is [him] and Scott.
    11. Where [there] is smoke, [you're] likely to find Greg, The Torch’s star reporter.
    12. [Their] suggestion was not as good as hers.
    13. When [you're] near a deadline, panic may set in.
    14. Advertisting has [its] own deadline, and [it's] earlier than the deadline for news.
    15. After [their] interviews, beginning reporters sometimes cant decipher [their] notes.
    16. During a press conference, [you're] scribbling so fast that some of [your] handwriting is almost illegible.
    17. If you can’t read [your] own handwriting, [they're] almost useless.
    18. [It's] unwise to rely upon memory, especially if [your] story includes quotes.
    19. A news story loses [its] credibility if [it's] not based on reliable interviews.
    2o. Being [there] isnt enough; a reporter’s story is only as solid as [its] facts and information.

  • 7y13r // November 19, 2008 at 6:24 pm | Reply

    1.Him
    2. him, her
    3. He, She
    4. her
    5. she
    6. him
    7. they, we
    8. me
    9. they
    10. him

    11. there, you’re
    12. Their
    13. you’re
    14. its, it’s
    15. their, their
    16. you’re, your
    17. your, they’re
    18. It’s, your
    19. its, it’s
    20. there, its

  • madisonjsanders // November 19, 2008 at 6:28 pm | Reply

    PART A
    1. him
    2. him, her
    3. he, she
    4. she
    5. she
    6. him
    7. they, we
    8. me
    9. they
    10. he

    PART B
    1. there, you’re
    2. their
    3. you’re
    4. its, its
    5. their, their
    6. you’re, your
    7. your, they’re
    8. it’s, your
    9. its, it’s
    10. there, its

  • rachelcoller // November 19, 2008 at 6:30 pm | Reply

    1. Him
    2. him, her
    3. He, she
    4. She
    5. She
    6. Him
    7. They, we
    8. me
    9. they
    10. he
    1. there, you’re
    2. Their
    3. You’re
    4. Its
    5. It’s
    6. You’re, your
    7. Your, they’re
    8. It’s, your
    9. Its, it’s
    10. There, its

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