Please Do Now:
Today, students will:
- Read the following opinion article:amendment-21
- Is it an editorial or a column? Why?
- How can we evaluate this article? Let’s come up with a peer review sheet.
- Finalize planning sheets for editorials and columns.
- Finalize article ideas.
Tonight’s homework is:
- Planners due Wednesday
20 responses so far ↓
kevins2011 // November 17, 2008 at 6:07 pm |
1) Board members are considering a raise in teachers’ pay, which many teachers feel isn’t high enough.
If an error occurs, The Torch will print a retraction in the following edition on the same page that the error occurred.
2) The Blazers meet the Panthers Friday, September 21 at 9pm. After three straight victories, the Blazers are out for another.
3) Clear
4) Clear
5) Clear
6) The students who originated the plan stated that their proposal was the better one.
7) Clear
9) Clear
10) Newcomer Leonard Washington will attempt a demanding job; rebuilding the boys’ and girls’ tennis teams.
lenac2011 // November 17, 2008 at 6:11 pm |
1. which many-board members
2. Not clear. The Blazers meet the Panthers Friday, Sept. 21, at 9 P.M. After three straight victories, the Blazers are out for another.
3. his-teacher, it-clearing his throat, who-students, them-throat clearings
4. whose-track team
5. Torch-newspaper, their-students, that-dress code, they-students
6. Not clear. The students who originated the plan told their opponents that their own proposal was the better one.
7. that-rummy, him-Jeff
8. its-the Torch, that-same page
9. that-panel of speakers, their-judge, a member of Alanon-Teen, and an adolescent center drug counselor
10. which-rebuilding both boys’ and girl’s tennis teams
LyssaG2011 // November 17, 2008 at 6:11 pm |
1. Board members are considering a raise in teachers’ pay because teachers have complained that they’re salary is not high enough.
2. The Blazers meet the Panthers Friday, September 21 at 9 P.M. With a three-game winning streak, the Blazers are sure to be victorious again.
3. teacher-his, cough-it, student-who; The teacher cleared his throat os often it distacted the student who began to count the number of coughs.
4. letter men-goal
5. their- students, that-dress code, they-students
6. 1st their- students; The students who originated the plan told their opponents that the better proposal was the one made themselves.
7. Jeff enjoys a variety of online rummy that was sent to him by a friend.
8. The Torch-its, page-that
9. speakers-that & their
10. rebuilding-which
allisonnovack // November 17, 2008 at 6:14 pm |
1) Board member Rod Smith is considering a raise in teachers’ pay which many feel isn’t high enough.
its, the Torch
2) Blazers, Panthers; they’re
3) his
4) This years track team boasts a feild of 99 candidates and 6 returning senior letter men whose goal is to repeat last years champion season.
5) their, they
6) their
7) Jeff, him
9) The session will feature a panel of speakers that includes Judge Harry, John from adalon teen, and Jannette, an adolecent drug couseler, who will share their experience and encourage audience input.
10) Leonard washington
RayL2012 // November 17, 2008 at 6:14 pm |
1. Board members are considering a raise in teachers pay, which teachers think isnt high enough.
2. The Blazers meet the Panthers, sept. 21, at 9 pm. After these straight victories the Blazers are out for another.
3. A teacher cleared his throught so often, that a distracted student began to count the teachers coughs.
4. Who
5.Torch, Their, That, They
6. Their, Their
7. Jeff enjoys a variety of rummy played on the computer that one of his friends sent him.
8. If an error accurs, The Torch will print its retraction on the same page where the error occured.
9. The seesion will feature a panel of speakers , that include a judge, a member of Alanon-Teen and an adolescent center drug counsolor, who will share the panels experience and and encoursge audience input.
10. Which
jessekirk11 // November 17, 2008 at 6:14 pm |
1. which many
2. After three straight victories, the Blazers are out for another.
3. The teacher cleared his throat so often that one distracted student began to count each time he did it.
4. whose goal
5. In a recent poll conducted by The Torch, the majority of students expressed their views about an unpopular change in the dress code.
6. The students who originated the plan told their oponents that their own proposal was the better one.
7. Jeffy enjoys a variety of computer-based rummy that one of his friends sent to him.
8. its retraction, that the error
9. …..Each of the members will share his or her experiences and encourage audience input.
10. Newcomer Leonard Washington’s job of rebuilding both the boys and girls tennis teams is demanding for one person.
hkramer14 // November 17, 2008 at 6:15 pm |
1. Board members are considering a raise in teacher’s pay because many teachers feel it is not high enough.
2. The Blazers, who have three straight victories, meet the Panthers on Friday, September 21 at 9 pm.
3. The teacher cleared his throat so often, it distracted a student, whom began to count them.
4. This year’s track team, whose goal is to repeat last year’s championship season, boasts a field of 39 candidates and six returning letter men.
5. that they-students.
6. their-students who originated the plan.
7. Jeff enjoys playing a variety of rummy, which his friend sent him,on the computer.
8. its-The Torch.
9. The session will feature a panel of speakers who will share their experiences and encourage audience input,including a judge who is a member of Alanon-Teen, and an adult center drug counselor.
10. Newcomer Leonard Washington will try to finish the demanding task of rebuilding the boys’ and girls’ tennis teams.
laurenpeterson1 // November 17, 2008 at 6:16 pm |
1.Board members are considering a raise in teachers’ pay, of which many don’t feel is high enough.
2.The Blazers met the Panthers Friday, Sept, 21 at 9 pm. After three straight victories, The Blazers are out for another.
3.The teacher cleared his throat so often that a distracted student began to count them.
4.This year’s track team boasts a field of six men, whose goal is to repeat last year’s championship season and 39 other candidates.
5.In a recent Torch poll, students expressed their not so positive views on the new dress code.
6.The students who originated the plan told their opponents that the opposing teams plan was better.
7. Jeff enjoys a variety of rummy played on the computer, the same variety that one of his friends sent him.
8.If an error occurs, The Torch will print their retraction on the same page in which the error occurred in the following edition.
9.The session will feature a panel of speakers, which will include a judge, a member of Alanon-Teen and an adolescent center drug counselor, who will share their personal experiences as well as encourage audience input.
10.Newcomer Leonard Washington has the demanding job of rebuilding both the boys’ and girls’ tennis teams.
Kelsey Sumalla // November 17, 2008 at 6:17 pm |
1. Board members are considering a raise in teachers pay, which many teachers feel isn’t high enough.
2. The Blazers meet the Panthers Friday, September 21, at 9 P.M. After three straight victories the Blazers are out for another one.
3. The teacher cleared his throat so often that it the distracted students began to count how many time the teacher cleared his throat.
4. This year’s track team boasts a field of 39 candidates and six returning letter men, all of whom share the goal of repeating last year’s championship season.
5. In a recent Torch newspaper poll, a majority of the students expressed negative views about the change in the dress code.
6. The students who originated the plan told their opponents that the proposal they made was the better one.
7. Jeff enjoys a variety of rummy played on the computer that Jeff’s friend sent him.
8. If an error occurs, The Torch will print the retraction in the following edition on the same page the error occurred.
9. The session will feature a panel of speakers including a judge, a member of Alanon-Teen, and an adolescent center drug counselor, who will share experiences and encourage audience input.
10. Newcomer Leonard Washington will try to rebuild both the boys’ and girls’ tennis teams, a demanding job for one person.
brittanywaserstein // November 17, 2008 at 6:17 pm |
1- A raise in teachers’ pay is being considered by Board members because they feel it isn’t high enough.
2- Blazers/they’re
3- teacher/his, them/the times the teacher cleared his throat or the distractions, student/who, it/when the teacher cleared his throat
4- This year’s track team boasts a field of 39 candidates and six returning letter men, who a goal to repeat last year’s championship season.
5- students/their, students/they, dress code/that, Torch/poll
6- students’ opponents/ 1 their, students proposal/ 2 their
7- Jeff enjoys the variety of rummy played on the computer, which was sent by one of his friends.
8- the torch/its, page/that
9- speakers/that and their
10- rebuilding/ which
jessicaw2010 // November 17, 2008 at 6:18 pm |
1. many-unclear
Many people feel that teachers’ pay isnt high enough so the board members are considering a raise.
2. they’re- the panthers
3. his- the teacher, it- noise from throat, who- student who counted, them- amount of times teacher cleared his throat
4. whose- unclear
This years track team has 39 candidates, 6 being returning letter men who have the goal to repeat last years championship season.
5. their- students, that- certain thing that they wanted to change about dress code, they- students
6. their- students’ opponents, their- students
7. Jeff enjoys the variety of rummy played on the computer, which was sent by one of his friends.
8. its- the Torch, that- page
9. that- speaker, their- speaker
10. which- rebuilding
patrickquinlan // November 17, 2008 at 6:22 pm |
1. Board members are considering a raise in teachers’ pay, which teachers fell isn’t high enough.
2. On Friday Sept. 21 at 9PM, the blazers, seeking their 4rd straight win, meet the Panthers.
3. Students, counting the number of times the teacher cleared his throat, became distracted by them.
4. This year’s track team boasts a field of 39 candidates as well as 6 returning lettermen with a goal of repeating last year’s championships.
5. (fine)
6. the students who originated the plan told of their plans superiority to their opponents.
7. Jeff enjoys a variety of Rummy that his friend sent him which is played on the computer.
8. The Torch will print a retraction on the same page as an error the next publication, if one occurs.
9. The session will feature a panel of speakers, including a judge, a member of alanon-teen, and an adolescent center drug counselor sharing their experiences and encouraging audience input.
10. Newcomer Leonard Washington will try to rebuild the boys’ and girls’ tennis teams, a demanding job for one person.
alicel2011 // November 17, 2008 at 6:24 pm |
1.Board members are considering a raise in teachers pay which many people feel isn’t high enough.
2.The Blazer’s meet the Panthers Friday,Sept 2, at 9p.m. . After three straight victories the Blazer’s are out for another one.
3.CLEAR
4.Clear
5.Clear
6.Clear
7.Clear
8. If an error occurs The Torch would print it’s retraction in the following edition where the error occurred .
9.Clear.
10. Newcomer Leonard Washington will try to rebuild both the boys’ and the girls’ tennis team a demanding job for one person.
hrynor // November 17, 2008 at 6:26 pm |
1. Which Many – Board Members
2. After three straight victories against the Panthers, the Blazers are out for another win on Friday, September 21 at 9 pm.
3. The students counted how many times their teacher cleared his throat, because it was distracting.
4. Whose – 39 candidates and 6 returning letter men
5. Torch – Polls
Their – Students
That – dress code
They – Students
6. The students who originated the plan discussed their proposal, with their opponents, stating that theirs was better.
7. That – Rummy
Him – Jeff
8. Its – The Torch
That – Page
9. That – Speakers
Their – A member of Alanon – Teen and an adolescent center drug counselor
10. Newcomer Leonard Washington will try to finish the demanding task of rebuilding the boys’ and girls’ tennis teams.
kevins2011 // November 17, 2008 at 6:26 pm |
3) teacher – his…student – who
4) track team – whose
5) students – their/that/they
7) rummy – that…Jeff – him
9) panel – that/their
madisonjsanders // November 17, 2008 at 6:27 pm |
1. which many – board members
2. After three straight victories against the Panthers, the Blazers are out for another win on Friday, September 21at 9 pm.
3. The student counted how many times his teacher cleared his throat because it was so distracting.
4. whose – 39 candidates and six returning letter men
5. Torch – polls, their – students, that – dress code, they – students
6. The students who originated the plan discussed their proposal, with their opponents, stating that theirs was better.
7. That – Rummy, Him – Jeff
8. Its – The Torch, That – Page
9. That – Speakers, Their – A member of Alanon – Teen and an adolescent center drug counselor
10. Newcomer Leonard Washington will try to finish the demanding task of rebuilding the boys’ and girls’ tennis teams.
molliee // November 17, 2008 at 6:27 pm |
1. Due to many people feeling that the teachers dont get paid high enough, the board members are considering a raise.
2. The Blazers are going to meet the Panthers Friday, Sept. 21, at 9 P.M. After having three straight victories, the blazers are out for another.
3. The teacher cleared his throat so often, that it distracted the student who began to count the clearings.
4. This year’s track team boasts a field of 39 candidates and six returning letter men, all of whom share the goal of repeating last year’s championship season.
5. their- students, that-dress code, they-students
6. The students who originated the plan told of their plans superiority to their opponents.
7. Jeff enjoys a variety of Rummy that his friend sent him which is played on the computer.
8. The Torch-its, page-that
9. That-panel of speakers, their-judge, a member of Alanon-Teen, and an adolescent center drug counselor
10. Newcomer Leonard Washington will try to rebuild both the boys’ and girls’ tennis teams, a demanding job for one person./ which
carmenk2012 // November 17, 2008 at 6:33 pm |
1. Board members are considering a raise in teacher’s pay, that many people feel is not high enough.
2. The Blazers meet the Panthers Friday, Sept. 21, at 9 P.M. After the Blazer’s three straight victories, the two teams are out for another.
3. The student began to count how many times the teacher cleared his throat because it was so distracting.
4. whose – letter men
5. In a recent Torch poll, a majority of students expressed their views about a change in the dress code that th
6. The students who originated the plan told their opponents that their own proposal was the better one.
7. Jeff enjoys a variety of computerized rummy that his friend sent him.
8. its – The Torch; that – page
9. that – panel; their – panel
10. which – job
rachelcoller // November 19, 2008 at 3:53 am |
1. Board embers are considering a raise in teacher’s pay, which teacher’s feel isn’t high enough.
2. The Blazers meet the Panthers Friday, Sept 21st at 9 pm, after three straight victories, the Blazers are out for another.
3. The teacher cleared his throat so many times, that a distracted student counted the number of times the sound was made.
4. This year’s track team boasts a field of 39 candidates, and 6 returning letterman, all of whom share the goal to repeat last year’s championship season.
5. In a recent Torch poll, the majority of students expressed dislike towards the dress code.
6. The students who had originated the plan told the opposing side that the proposal made by the originators was the better one.
7. Jimmy enjoys the variety of rummy on the computer that Jeff’s friend had sent him.
8. If an error occurs, the Torch will print a retraction in the new edition on the same page where the previous error had occurred.
9. Speakers-that, their
10. Although a demanding job for one person, Leonard Washington will try to rebuild both the boy’s and girl’s tennis teams.
nadineg2012 // November 21, 2008 at 11:08 pm |
1. Board members are considering a raise in teachers’ pay, which many people feel isn’t high enough.
2. The Blazers met the Panthers Friday, Sept. 21 at 9 PM. After two straight victories, the Blazers are out for another.
3. The teacher cleared his throat so often that a student was distracted and began to count the coughs.
4. Whose- the returning letter men
5. In a recent Torch poll, a majority of students expressed their views about a change that they did not like in the dress code.
6. The students who organized the plan told their opponents that their own plan was the better one.
7. Jeff enjoys a variety of computerized rummy that one of his friends sent him.
8. Its- the Torch, that- the page
9. That- the panel, their- the named speakers
10. Leonard Washington will tackle a demanding job for one person when he tries to rebuild both the girls’ and boys’ tennis teams.