I am off campus speaking to the Kiwanis Club. Ms Sevillanos is in charge, and can write passes for only two students to be out of the room at a time, for reporting purposes.
I hope to be back before the end of the period, but just in case I don’t see you, have a great weekend! Good luck completing you final drafts, reflections, and compiling your packets (due Monday).
Please Do Now:
- Answer as a comment to this post (Rewrite sentences that are not OK):
- Remember, these rules apply 100% to news stories and about 90% to features stories.
Today, students will:
- Review the peer edits of J2 students. Check your comment wall. If no J2 student has left you a peer edit, send a message to Miriam Kolker and she will take care of it for you by the end of tonight.
- Do any outstanding reporting that needs to be completed for your final draft.
- Begin writing your final draft.
- Begin writing your reflection.
Tonight’s homework is:
- Full article packets are due Monday. NO EXCEPTIONS. Packets should include, in the following order: Cover page, Reflection, Final Draft, J2 Peer Edit, Second Draft, J1 Peer Edit, First Draft, Notes and Quotes, Planner.
24 responses so far ↓
LyssaG2011 // November 6, 2008 at 6:19 pm |
1) NO; we
NO; your, our, you understood
2) NO; our, you
3) NO; you, we
4) OK
5) NO; us, you
6) NO; you, our
7) OK
9) OK
10) OK
nadineg2012 // November 6, 2008 at 6:21 pm |
1) NO- BHS has a larger enrollment and faculty this year, with five new teachers.
NO- Students should make it a point to support their team at its last home game before the league tourney.
2) NO- After their first four games, the girls’ volley ball team holds a 2-2 record, and are out to end up on the winning side.
3) NO- A new piece of “found metal”can be seen on the cafeteria wall, thanks to Edvin Baker, Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist.
4) OK
5) NO- The end of the first semester is nearing and students know what that means… a round of exams.
6) NO- What students’ T-shirts say is their business, not the administration’s.
7) OK
9) OK
10) OK
RayL2012 // November 6, 2008 at 6:23 pm |
1.No, The school has a larger enrolment at BHS this year, and a larger faculty including five new teachers
2. No, after their first games, the girls vollyball team holds 2-2 and be sure they are bound to be on the winning side
3. No, on the cafeteria wall there is a new sculupture and have Edvin Baker, byrnhust graduate and practicing artists, to thank for.
4. Ok
5. The end of the semester has come, that means a massive amount of exams.
6. What is said on a teacher is none of the admistrations business.
7.Ok
8. Make a point to support the schools home team before the league tourney.
9.Ok
10.Ok
rachelcoller // November 6, 2008 at 6:27 pm |
1. No- BHS has a larger enrollment enrolment this year as well as a larger faculty as well as five new teachers.
2. No- After the first four games, the girls’ volleyball team hold a 2-2 record, and are out to end up on the winning side.
3. No- Thanks to Edvin Baker, Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist a new piece of “found metal” sculpture is on the cafeteria wall.
4. OK
5. The end of the first semester is upon the students…that means a round of exams.
6. No- What is said on a t-shirt is the student’s business, not the administrations.
7. OK
8. No- Students should make it a point to support the team at the last home game before the tourney.
9. Ok
10. Ok
kevins2011 // November 6, 2008 at 6:27 pm |
1) No – As BHS has a larger enrollment this year, they also have a larger faculty with five new teachers.
Make it a point to support the team at their last home game before the league tourney.
2) No – After their first four games, the girls’ volleyball team holds a 2-2 record.
3) No – There is a new piece of “found metal” sculpture on the cafeteria wall, which was made by Edvin Baker, Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist.
4) Ok
5) No – The end of the first semester is almost here, which means a round of exams.
6) No – Because the meaning of the sentence is objective, it can’t be rewritten without changing the meaning.
7) Ok
9) Ok
10) Ok
laurenpeterson1 // November 6, 2008 at 6:30 pm |
1.No= The school has a larger enrolment at BHS this year, and a larger faculty including five new teachers
2. No= After their first games, the girls vollyball team holds 2-2 and be sure they are bound to be on the winning side
3. No= On the cafeteria wall there is a new sculupture and have Edvin Baker, byrnhust graduate and practicing artists, to thank for.
4. OK
5. No=The end of the semester has come, that means a massive amount of exams.
6.No= What students’ T-shirts say is their business, not the administration’s.
7.OK
8. Make a point to support the schools home team before the league tourney.
9.OK
10.OK
LyssaG2011 // November 6, 2008 at 6:31 pm |
1. BHS’s increase in enrollment has led to the hiring of five new teachers.
2. After their first four games, the BHS volleyball team holds a 2-2 record and is bound to end up on the winning side.
3. Edvin Baker, Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist, created the new “found metal” sculpture on the cafeteria wall.
5. As the end of semester arrives, students will be taking their exams.
6. The students, not the administration, should be able to decide what their T-shirts say.
8. Students should support their team at the last home game before the leage tourney.
jessicaw2010 // November 6, 2008 at 6:31 pm |
1. No-The school has a larger enrollment at BHS this year and also has a larger faculty with 5 new teachers.
2. No- After their first four games, the girls volleyball team holds a 2-2 record, and will be sure to end up on the winning side.
3. No- On the cafeteria wall there is a new sculpture thanks to Edvin Baker, a Byrnehurst graduate and aritst.
4. Ok
5. No- The first semester is almost over which means a round of exams will be occuring.
6. No- Whatever is said on a T-shirt is not the administrations buisness, its yours.
7. Ok
8. No- Make a point to support the schools last home game before the league tourney.
9. Ok
10. Ok
hrynor // November 6, 2008 at 6:34 pm |
No 1. Just as we have a larger enrollment at BHS this year, we also have a larger faculty.
No 2. After their first four games, our girls’ volleyball team holds a 2 -2 record, and they’re out to end up on the winning side.
No 3. You may have noticed a new piece of “found metal” sculpture on the cafeteria wall. Edvin Baker, Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist, is to be thanked for it.
Okay 4. No plans exist to discontinue open lunch, despite rumors to the contrary, Principal Kevin Claypoole declared.
No 5. The end of first semester is almost here, and you know what that means… a round of exams.
No 6. What you want to say on a T – shirt is not the administration’s business.
Okay 7. Questions about administrators’ rights to censor student T – shirts will come before the Byrnehurst Board of Education April 13.
No 8. Make it a point to support your team at the last home game before the league tourney.
Okay 9. “Plan to attend the spring carnival for a lot of fun and a chance to help a worthy cause,” urged Bill Ludlow, Student Council president.
Okay 10. Students deal with pressures of exam time in various ways, from cramming all night to cramming on junk food, said BHS counselor Jim Wright.
molliee // November 6, 2008 at 6:35 pm |
1) NO- BHS has a larger enrollment and faculty this year, with five new teachers.
2. NO – After their first games, the girls vollyball team holds 2-2 and be sure they are bound to be on the winning side
3) NO – There is a new piece of “found metal” sculpture on the cafeteria wall, which was made by Edvin Baker, Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist.
4. OK
5) NO- The end of the first semester is nearing and students know what that means… a round of exams.
6.NO- What students’ T-shirts say is their business, not the administration’s.
7. OK
8. NO- Students should make it a point to support their team at its last home game before the league tourney.
9.OK
10.OK
lenac2011 // November 6, 2008 at 6:37 pm |
1. No; Enrollment at BHS is larger this year, as well as a larger faculty with five new teachers.
2. No; After their first four games, the girls’ volleyball team holds a 2-2 record so they’re sure to end up on the winning side.
3. No; Edvin Baker, Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist made the “found piece” sculpture hanging on the cafeteria.
4.OK
5. No; The end of the first semester brings a round of exams.
6. No; What is said on a T-shirt is not the administrators business.
7. OK
8. No; Students should support their team at the last home game before the team torney.
9. OK
10.OK
alicel2011 // November 6, 2008 at 6:37 pm |
1. BHS has a higher enrollment this year , they also have a higher faculty with five new teachers.
2. After their first four games the girls’ volleyball team holds a 2-2 record and surely they’re out to end up on the winning side 2.
3. A new piece of ” found metal sculputure may have been noticed on the cafeteria wall. Edwin Baker, Byrenhurst graduate and practicing artist is to thank for it.
4.OK
5. The end of semester is almost near which means … a round of exam.
6. What is said on a t-shirt is the student;s bussiness not the administration’s/
7. OK
8.Make it a point to support the team at the ;ast home game before the league tourney.
9. OK
10.OK
hkramer14 // November 6, 2008 at 6:37 pm |
1.No: BHS has a larger enrollment enrolment this year as well as a larger faculty as well as five new teachers.
2. No: After the first four games, the girls volleyball team hold a 2-2 record, and are out to end up on the winning side.
3. No: A new piece of “found metal”can be seen on the cafeteria wall, thanks to Edvin Baker, a Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist.
4. Okay
5.No: The end of the first semester is almost here, a large amount of exams.
6. No: What is said on student’s t-shirts is their business, not the administration’s.
7. Okay
8. No: Students should make it a point to support their team, at its last home game before the league tourney.
9. Okay
10. Okay
madisonjsanders // November 6, 2008 at 6:42 pm |
No 1. Just as we have a larger enrollment at BHS this year, we also have a larger faculty.
No 2. After their first four games, our girls’ volleyball team holds a 2 -2 record, and they’re out to end up on the winning side.
No 3. You may have noticed a new piece of “found metal” sculpture on the cafeteria wall. Edvin Baker, Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist, is to be thanked for it.
Okay 4. No plans exist to discontinue open lunch, despite rumors to the contrary, Principal Kevin Claypoole declared.
No 5. The end of first semester is almost here, and you know what that means… a round of exams.
No 6. What you want to say on a T – shirt is not the administration’s business.
Okay 7. Questions about administrators’ rights to censor student T – shirts will come before the Byrnehurst Board of Education April 13.
No 8. Make it a point to support your team at the last home game before the league tourney.
Okay 9. “Plan to attend the spring carnival for a lot of fun and a chance to help a worthy cause,” urged Bill Ludlow, Student Council president.
Okay 10. Students deal with pressures of exam time in various ways, from cramming all night to cramming on junk food, said BHS counselor Jim Wright.
madisonjsanders // November 6, 2008 at 6:47 pm |
:& :’( :/ :S :* :X :>
>:O B)
Love,
Helen and Maddie
P.S. just testing the faces…
brittanywaserstein // November 6, 2008 at 6:52 pm |
1- no-Enrollment at BHS is larger this year, as well as a larger faculty with five new teachers.
2- no- After the first four games, the girls’ volleyball team holds a 2-2 record and they are out to end up on the winning side.
3- no- On the cafeteria wall there is a new sculupture that may be noticed which is thanked by Edvin Baker, byrnhust graduate and practicing artists, to thank for.
4- ok
5- no- as the end of the semester is near, it means there will be a round of exams.
6- no- It isnt the administrators business what it says on the T-shirts.
7- ok
8- no- Since it is the last home game before the league tourney, make it a point to support the team.
9- ok
10- ok
molliee // November 6, 2008 at 7:19 pm |
molliee // November 6, 2008 at 7:20 pm |
molliee // November 6, 2008 at 7:20 pm |
molliee // November 6, 2008 at 7:21 pm |
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molliee // November 6, 2008 at 7:22 pm |
molliee // November 6, 2008 at 7:23 pm |
Kelsey Sumalla // November 8, 2008 at 5:26 pm |
1. There is a large enrollment at BHS this year and a larger faculty with five new teachers.
2. After the first four games, and girls volleyball team holds a 2-2 record.
3. There is a new piece of “found metal” sculpture on the cafeteria wall made by Edvin Baker, Byrnehurst graduate and practicing artist.
4. Ok
5. As the end of the first semester nears, students will have to take a round of exams.
6. What students’ t-shirts say is their business, not the administrations.
7. Ok
8. Students should make it a point to support their team at their last home game before the league tourney.
9. Ok
10. Ok
allisonnovack // November 10, 2008 at 2:03 am |
1)There is a large enrollment at BHS this year and a larger faculty with five new teachers.
Students should make it a point to support their team at their last home game before the leauge tournement.
2) After their first four games, our girls’ volleyball team holds a 2 -2 record, and they’re heading to end up on the winning side.
3) On the cafeteria wall there is a new sculupture made by Edvin Baker, byrnhust graduate and practicing artists.
4) No plans exist to discontinue open lunch, despite rumors to the contrary, Principal Kevin Claypoole declared.
5) As the end of the first semester nears, students will have to take a round of exams.
6) It isnt the administrators business what it says on the T-shirts.
7) ok
9) ok
10) ok