Please Do Now:
- Read the following Miami Herald article: http://www.miamiherald.com/519/story/516503.html
- Write a new lead for the article that you would use for a news story in the Beachcomber.
- Make a list of the titles of all people interviewed in the story.
- Make a list on an additional three people you would interview for a news story in the Beachcomber.
- Are you interested in writing this story for the paper?
Today, students will:
- Report individual stories.
- Work on First Drafts.
Tonight’s homework is:
- First Drafts are due Friday at the end of class.
13 responses so far ↓
amaliar2011 // May 7, 2008 at 5:06 pm |
The uncle
The police department (detectives)
The little girl
The defense attorney for the girl’s mother.
The mother of the girl
The aunt
The teacher
NO. Too gruesome
amandae2011 // May 7, 2008 at 5:10 pm |
1. After a 7 year old girl was discovered to have swollen fingers at school, Felicia Watkins, a Miami Beach High cafeteria worker, was charged with the abuse of her niece.
2. Miami Detective Eutemio Cepero
Watkins, a Miami Beach High cafeteria worker
A bakery worker, Lewis Height
The 7-year-old girl’s mother, Latressa Height
The girl’s father, Larrie Jazzy Abernathy
Her [Height's] son, Earnest Height
Her [Height's] defense attorney, Amy Agnoli
Earnest’s pal, Michael Lamar Francis
His [Francis's] attorney, Louis Casuso.
Miami Herald staff writer Carol Marbin Miller
3. Dr. Sidener
Students
Teachers
4. YES
carlosm2010 // May 7, 2008 at 5:11 pm |
uncle
police
attorney
detectives
baker
girl
aunt
teacher
neighbors
mother
joselyng2010 // May 7, 2008 at 5:13 pm |
1. Write a new lead for the article that you would use for a news story in the Beachcomber.
2. Make a list of the titles of all people interviewed in the story.
3. Make a list on an additional three people you would interview for a news story in the Beachcomber.
4. Are you interested in writing this story for the paper?
1. Aunt Felicia Watkins 37, Miami Beach Senior High Cafeteria worker was arrested with allegations of abusing her 7 year old niece by being starved and tortured for months.
2. Miami Detectives, Aunt, Uncle, Teacher, Police,
3. Teacher who discovered the abuse, Principal of the school, and Dr. Sidener
4. No
blancaj2011j // May 7, 2008 at 5:14 pm |
1. Felicia Watkins, a Miami Beach Senior High cafeteria worker, has been charged for starving and torturing her niece for months.
2. Miami detectives, a bakery worker, Miami Beach High cafeteria worker, the 7-year-old girl’s mother, Earnest’s pal (the suspected driver), and his attorney.
3. The teacher of the girl, the mother of the girl, and possibly the girl hersef (even though it is traumatic to live it once, but it is important to get her story).
4. Not really. I think it is sad and I wouldn’t want to do it.
mariap2011 // May 7, 2008 at 5:14 pm |
- Lead: A Beach High lunch lady is being charged for abusing her 7 year old niece that was currently under her care.
- People interviewed:
-Miami Detective Eutemio Cepero
-Lewis Height, a bakery work
- Dr.Sidener, students, and teachers
-YES!!!
arielaz2009 // May 7, 2008 at 5:14 pm |
Miami Detective, Eutemio Cepero
Lewis Height, Watkins’ Husband
witnesses who told Miami-Dade detectives
Watkins’ defense attorney, Amy Agnoli
the girl’s school teacher
any of the girl’s friends from school
the girl’s mother/father
yes, I am interested in writing this story for the paper.
wendyg2011 // May 7, 2008 at 5:15 pm |
NEW LEAD: Felicia Watkins, a cafeteria lady at MBSH, was arrested for abusing her 7-year-old niece.
PEOPLE INTERVIEWED: Miami Detective Eutemio Cepero, Bakery worker Lewis Height
PEOPLE WOULD INTERVIEW: Watkins coworkers, Dr. Sidener, teachers
No, i wouldn’t be interested.
nataliea2011 // May 7, 2008 at 5:15 pm |
lead ______________________
titles
Aunt
Uncle
Miami Detective
Miami-Dade Police
i’m not
kids who know her
co workers
priicple
oscart2007 // May 7, 2008 at 5:16 pm |
Girl is abused by a aunt
The abused girl
A police detective at the crime
A lawyer of the aunt and of the girl
The mother
The aunt
A neighbor of the aunt
I don’t want to write this.
alessiap2011 // May 7, 2008 at 5:16 pm |
1. After the discovery of an abused child, Felicia Watkins, a Miami Beach High cafeteria worker was arrested on accuont of torturing her seven year old niece.
2.Police authorities
Lewis Height
Ernest Height
Larrie Jazzy Abernathy
Louis Casuso
Amy Agnoli
3.Dr. Sidener
Neighbors
People at school who know her
4. Yes
stephaniea2009 // May 7, 2008 at 5:16 pm |
lead: Crazy cafeteria lady abuses seven year old neice for no significant reason.
Interviewee’s:
1. Dr. Sidener
2. Detectives
3. Police Station
4. Students at Beach
joselynm2009 // May 7, 2008 at 5:18 pm |
Watkins, Miami Beach Senior High luch lady, was charged for abuse of her 7 year old niece.
-detective of SVU
-husband
-niece
-latressa
-teacher
fellow lunch workers, Sidener, students, teachers @ beach